Talk:Russian destroyer Gadzhibey/GA1
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 14:10, 16 August 2019 (UTC)
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- No DAB links
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[edit]Prose Suggestions
[edit]Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.
- honor of the victories of Admiral Fyodor Ushakov suggest honor of the victorious battles of Admiral Fyodor Ushakov
- The destroyer bombarded Alushta before it was captured by the amphibious detachment, suggest The destroyer bombarded Alushta before the city was captured by the amphibious detachment, kind of confusing; initially thought the Gadzhibey had been captured.
- @Kges1901 and Sturmvogel 66: That is all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:19, 19 August 2019 (UTC)
- Good ideas both. Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:53, 19 August 2019 (UTC)