Talk:Russian battleship Sevastopol (1911)/GA1
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Reviewer: JonCatalán(Talk) 23:57, 10 October 2010 (UTC)
- I did the usual light ce of the whole text.
- "She was laid up in 1918 for lack of manpower, but her crew joined the Kronstadt Rebellion of 1921." → What does it mean to get "laid up"? The reason I ask is because I am confused when you write a "lack of manpower", and then say, "but her crew joined...".
- See if you agree with the division of the "service" section into two sub-headings. I think it's easier to follow, now.
- Language is good.
- Images check out.
- Article is stable.
I figure you'll take this to a-class, which I think it's ready for. Cheers. JonCatalán(Talk) 00:54, 11 October 2010 (UTC)