Talk:Rui En/Archive 1

Archive 1

Biased

The article seemed to be biased to Joanne Peh, and talked a lot about her fan club. Very biased. 220.255.7.183 (talk) —Preceding undated comment was added at 09:06, 21 November 2008 (UTC).

Problem has been rectified. -- Pehxinyi (talk) 19:08, 27 September 2010 (UTC)

WikiProject class rating

This article was automatically assessed because at least one article was rated and this bot brought all the other ratings up to at least that level. BetacommandBot 04:04, 28 August 2007 (UTC)

Major overhaul was done to the page. Reassessment appreciated. -- Pehxinyi (talk) 19:09, 27 September 2010 (UTC)

Notable Highlights & Achievements

It will be good that the whole section converted to prose and rename section to Life and career or something similar, see Fann Wong as an example. Try to summarise the subsections into significant milestones instead of year by year. Xaiver0510 (talk) 05:02, 29 September 2010 (UTC)

Discography

For her two albums, do summarise to just 2 lines. New articles can be created individually for her albums to put in more information. Other performances like concert do not need to be so detailed and her involvement can be integrated into her career section. Xaiver0510 (talk) 05:28, 29 September 2010 (UTC)

Sources

I am not so sure abt rbkd.com as a good source as it is a fan club. However, if the article being referenced in rbkd.com has good third party sources such as omy.sg or straits time, use these sources instead. Xaiver0510 (talk) 02:31, 30 September 2010 (UTC)

Clean Up

I'm in the process of cleaning up this article progressively and would appreciate advice, tolerance and patience meanwhile. Thanks! -- Pehxinyi (talk) 18:25, 3 October 2010 (UTC)

Filmography

As per discography, overload of extra information not needed. Can refer to Wentworth Miller's Filmography section for example. Guest appearance in variety show is quite trivial as while the show is notable, individual epsiode is normally non-notable. Xaiver0510 (talk) 04:42, 3 October 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! I'm cleaning up the article from top down and I need a little more time. Thanks for the help and advice! -- Pehxinyi (talk) 18:26, 3 October 2010 (UTC)

Not rushing you as I understand we have various commitments and you have done a great job so far! Just pointing you to some references for easier editing by you! --Xaiver0510 (talk) 01:18, 4 October 2010 (UTC)

Yes, your advices had been really useful. Thanks! -- Pehxinyi (talk) 04:54, 4 October 2010 (UTC)

Placement of citations

The citations should not be placed in the same place as the section headers. If there is nowhere else to place it, just write a sentence or two for that particular section and add the citation right after the sentence. Thanks, ANGCHENRUI ^Talk♨ 09:54, 29 September 2010 (UTC)

Corrected this issue. -- Pehxinyi (talk) 19:37, 4 October 2010 (UTC)

Use of Chinese language in the article

The MOS makes mention of the use of the Chinese language in English Wikipedia articles. See here – actually only the first three sections of that page applies. Particularly, "this edition of Wikipedia is in English, so do not use characters or romanized forms excessively... making this a kind of English–Chinese bilingual edition. However, if the term does not have an established translation (that is, has multiple translations or none), feel free to provide the Chinese characters." I think the article can be improved with regards to that. Regards, ANGCHENRUI ^Talk♨ 09:58, 29 September 2010 (UTC)

Chinese Characters for names of roles

Chinese characters have been added by 60.50.141.187 for the names of the roles in Filmography (which already have proper English names), is this appropriate and in line with MOS:CHINESE? Please advise. -- Pehxinyi (talk) 17:44, 7 October 2010 (UTC)

Chinese titles of the dramas

Chinese titles added by 124.13.205.24 are removed in accordance to MOS:CHINESE: :"Also, to help establish a simple and clean appearance, if a term is Wikified and has an article, do not provide characters or romanization again." The titles for the dramas are already Wikified. -- Pehxinyi (talk) 17:44, 7 October 2010 (UTC)