Talk:Royal touch/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 08:41, 9 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I'm Calvin999 and I am reviewing this article.

Review

I think if you're going to link queens regnant of England, then you should also link the kings of England and the kings of France.
- The link leads not to an article about queens regnant of England, but to an article explaining what queen regnant means. I can remove the link if you think it would be better without it. I could also reword it to say "monarchs of England and France", though that is very similar to the lead sentence.
  - No I think it's good, but I thought perhaps for the kings that you could link to a list of kings. — Calvin999 20:41, 12 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
In England, Saint Edward the Confessor (r. 1042–1066) was said to be the first monarch to possess the healing power of the royal touch. → Something like this needs to have a citation at the end of the sentence to support it.
- I copied it over. Surtsicna (talk) 19:24, 12 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
notably including → most notably
- Done. Surtsicna (talk) 19:24, 12 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
The diseased was → Shouldn't this be were? As it wasn't just one person who received the medal to wear.
- Possibly. It seems all the same to me, but I am not the native speaker here :) Surtsicna (talk) 19:24, 12 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
The placement of the blue background quote box is odd, because it's creating an unnecessary white space to the right of it, underneath the images of the coins.
- I don't see the white space and, in any case, I wouldn't know what to do with the quote box. I can't move it to the left because of the list and I can't move it elsewhere because it is relevant to the section (and the list). What do you suggest? Surtsicna (talk) 19:24, 12 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  - Maybe because I have a bigger screen, but the box was interfering with the layout. I've moved it now. ` — Calvin999
The Henrician practice → Can Henrician be linked?
- To what do you think I should link it? It refers to Henry VIII, linked in the preceding paragraph. Surtsicna (talk) 19:24, 12 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  - I know, but some people may not have got that. I've personally never heard of it before. — Calvin999 20:41, 12 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Summary

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. Has an appropriate reference section:

B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:

C. No original research:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects:

B. Focused:
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias:
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc:
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:

Outcome

COmpact, but really interesting article. Hardly any issues to comment on really. On hold for 7 days. — Calvin999 17:37, 12 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you. I am honored to have such a veteran review it. Surtsicna (talk) 19:24, 12 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you, that's kind. — Calvin999 20:41, 12 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Pass or Fail:

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