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Seems a bit light. On reading through the article, I'd mention something more about his time at Maryland; perhaps the turnover of coaches before he took over, his previous applications or the reasons for his sacking. Or perhaps all three.
Y Expanded. Let me know if that is satisfactory.
Early life
"Lester was named to the West Virginia 1940–1949 All-Time Team." Is this right? 1940–1949 and All-Time Team seemed to be a bit contradictory.
Y Fixed.
High school coach
"He then moved on to Allegany High School in Cumberland, Maryland." Rather than use "then" it would be better to say which year.
Y I used "following year" to make it less redundant with repeated numerical years.
"In the season's second-to-last game," Would penultimate game not be better?
Y Changed.
"Lester attributed Maryland's football woes to the turnover at head coach and lack of depth due to recruiting shortcomings." recruiting shortcomings doesn't quite sound right. How about recruitment shortcomings?
Y Changed.
Return to high school coaching
"His combined high school coaching record was 260–72–3." Do you have a source for this?
Y Removed it, because I can't find a source. It looks like he won 260 games at Montgomery County schools alone though, which wouldn't include Walton or Allegany.
Thanks for the review. I made some changes to address your comments. Please let me know how that looks, and if you have any other concerns. Strikehold (talk) 23:41, 9 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]