Talk:Roxen (singer)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 15:21, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

"Born in Cluj-Napoca on 5 January 2000 as Larisa Roxana Giurgiu," - more grammatically correct; Born Larisa Roxana Giurgiu on 5 January 2000 in Cluj-Napoca,
"was released in the November of the same year" - released later that year in November
"In an interview," - please state who conducted the interview
"she was revealed as the Romanian representative." - revealed by TVR
"were released on 21 February 2020." - I don't think the year is necessary here since it is already mentioned earlier in the paragraph
""Alcohol You" emerged as the winner of the national final." - please state the date for clarity
Delink China per MOS:OVERLINK
"Although TVR had considered sending "Alcohol You" to participate in the Eurovision Song Contest 2021," - {{xt|retaining "Alcohol You" as a song for

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/respond to the queries raised above. MWright96 (talk) 16:23, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96: Thank you for the review, I have addressed all your points. Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:34, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]