Talk:Rosemary Edna Sinclair/GA1
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:05, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:05, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
- General
- Some close paraphrasing is possible [1]
- I have addressed the issue. Some of the sentences are in quotes and others pertain to titles or names
- No dablinks or external link issue.
- Early life and education
- 12 year old Hyphens
- Done
- Personal life
- Valentine's Day 1970 Let's give the plain date.
- Added "14 February"
- Thanks for the review. Addressed above issues in the article. Nvvchar. 12:18, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
Thanks for the changes. This can be promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:15, 23 June 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you.Nvvchar. 07:06, 23 June 2016 (UTC)