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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:05, 22 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:05, 22 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

General
  • Some close paraphrasing is possible [1]
    • I have addressed the issue. Some of the sentences are in quotes and others pertain to titles or names
  • No dablinks or external link issue.
Early life and education
  • 12 year old Hyphens
  • Done
Personal life
  • Valentine's Day 1970 Let's give the plain date.
  • Added "14 February"

Thanks for the changes. This can be promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:15, 23 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]