Talk:Romania in the Eurovision Song Contest 2006/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:16, 1 April 2020 (UTC)
Going to review this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020 MWright96 (talk) 08:16, 1 April 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead
[edit]- "through the national selection Selecția Națională 2006" - it should be made more clearer that it was a national selection competition
- "Romania ultimately reached fourth place in the contest's Grand Final," - the date of the Grand Final of Eurovision 2006 is missing here
Selecția Națională 2006
[edit]- "a competition in order to select their entrant for the Eurovision Song Contest 2006." - the words "in order" are redundant in this sentence
- "was eventually disqualified from the contest due to having received television and radio airplay" - the text in bold should be written as due to the song for clarity and completeness
- "to 1 October 2005, TVR's cutoff date." - to TVR's cutoff date of 1 October 2005.
- "by Heaven were voluntarily withdrawn" - make it clear that the performers voluntarily withdrew their songs as stated in România Liberă
Indiggo controversy
[edit]- "In a late-night talk show following the winner's announcement," - the announcement of the winner,
- "they based the accusation on reports that their voting line was continuously busy and so people were unable to vote for them when they called." - , preventing people from voting for them when they called.
Promotion
[edit]- "Starting with 20 April 2006," - correct saying; should be on or from
At Eurovision
[edit]- "the show was aired on TVR," - broadcast is more formal
- "which yielded in various changes" - saw various changes
- "selected countries, except the host country" - try to not repeat the same word close together in the same sentence
- "qualified to the final due to their top 11 result the preceding year." - how about result in the 2005 contest. instead?
- "A reported €160,000 were" - was
Voting
[edit]- "Below is a breakdown of points awarded to Romania in the Grand Final, as well as by Romania in the semi-final" - try not to repeat the country's name in the same sentence
- "Romania finished in fourth position, being awarded a total of 172 points including 12 by Moldova and Spain, as well as ten by" - 172 points, including 12 by Moldova and Spain, and ten from Cyprus, Israel, Malta and Portugal.
- "For the Grand Final points announcement," - For the announcement of its points in the Grand Final,
References
[edit]- The spelling to EscToday in Reference 22 should be spelt as ESCToday for consistency
- Reference 25 is missing the date it was published
Will put the review on hold to give the nominator time to address/respond to the issues raised above. MWright96 (talk) 09:27, 1 April 2020 (UTC)
- @MWright96: I have solved everything here too. Thank you, again, very much for your reviews. All the best; Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:45, 1 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Cartoon network freak: Promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 06:47, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
- @MWright96: I have solved everything here too. Thank you, again, very much for your reviews. All the best; Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:45, 1 April 2020 (UTC)