Talk:Rocky Romero/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 04:52, 31 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Carbrera still planning on reviewing this article? MPJ-DK 21:41, 16 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

MPJ-DK – Yes, I apologize. I've had some college meetings lately but it should be reviewed within the next 24 hours. Regards, Carbrera (talk) 23:40, 17 June 2017 (UTC).[reply]

Initial comments:

In the lead, I would clarify "September 13, 1997" instead of "1997" since it marked the beginning of his professional career
Any reason why Rocky Romero is listed second, and not first, under "Ring name(s)"?
The entire first paragraph of "Early career (1997–2009)" is left unsourced; generally (and from my experience), each section ends with at least with one reference
There are a few more instances where there are commas missing after dates; "On September 20 at Death Before Dishonor XI" works because you eventually list a comma, but there are some missing at "On November 14", "In 2005", "In early 2008", and "On March 13, 2015".
"While in ROH, he and Reyes were also members of Homicide's stable, The Rottweilers. He left the company at the end of 2005 to focus on working in Japan." --> Completely unsourced
Have you thought about combining "Return to ROH (2007–2010, 2013–present)" and "Return to NJPW (2010–present)" as the events coincide with one another? As it stands, it may be a bit difficult to read
"On January 26, Romero teamed with Davey Richards and defeated the teams" --> What year is this? Since the previous date was in March, I'm assuming 2008 but the reader may think otherwise
"On March 10, 2017 at the 15th Anniversary Show, Roppongi Vice unsuccessfully challenged for the ROH World Tag Team Championship in a Las Vegas Street Fight against The Young Bucks and champions The Hardys" --> Completely unsourced
Under "Championships and accomplishments", every bulletpoint contains a citation except "Trios Tournament (2005) – with Ricky Reyes and Homicide"
For "Mixed martial arts record", I don't think you need dropdown boxes in the rows since there is only one row of information; I'd remove them
I don't think New Japan Pro Wrestling needs to be linked in all instances in the "References" section or else it may violate WP:OVERLINKING
Ditto with Wrestling Observing Newsletter
Reference #50, 53, and 56 all appear in a different font on my computer – is it the same for you too?

The remaining references appear to be reliable and notable

ON HOLD – sorry for the delay. The mouse to my computer died a few days ago so I had to purchase a new one. I should be set for any future reviews. Thanks, Carbrera (talk) 22:50, 20 June 2017 (UTC).[reply]

Hope it is okay to turn it into a number list? that way I can give you feedback for each point. MPJ-DK 23:29, 21 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

1) Fixed 2) If I am not mistaken the list should be sorted alphabetically, fixed it and took off a name or two I could find no record of 3) Sourced 4) I think I caught them all. 5) I reworded that section when I merged two ROH sections. 6) I did merge them so that 2010-present is one section, they work for NJPW but make appearances for ROH due to their collaboration, it makes more sense to be chronological 7) Specified 8) Removed, too detailed to list every match they lost 9) Sourced 10) That is the format of the MMA table, I cannot change that. 11) Removed 12) Removed 13) It is because it's mixing Japanese characters with western language, when it's defined as "script-title=ja:" I guess it looks a little different

Carbrera - I believe I have addressed all concerns so far? MPJ-DK 23:40, 21 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

MPJ-DK – shouldn't the years be combined from "2004-2005, 2007-2010" to "2004-2010"? Carbrera (talk) 01:57, 23 June 2017 (UTC).[reply]
- Carbrera That does not seem to be the general approach in wrestling articles since he did not work for ROH continously from 04 to 10, he was out of the company for at least a year around 2006. MPJ-DK 00:08, 24 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  - MPJ-DK – Fair enough. Everything else seems to be taken care of. Thank you for your cooperation. Carbrera (talk) 00:46, 24 June 2017 (UTC).[reply]

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