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Reviewer: Editoneer (talk · contribs) 14:53, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]


Greetings, I decided to start reviewing again. Editoneer (talk) 14:53, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Well-written, stable, neutral

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  • Crowe would be cast in the title role, Grammarly says is wrong and it also doesn't sound comfortable to me. I believe it should be something like:Casting Crowe in the title role.
 Done
  • Robin proposes that King John agree to a charter of rights, Subject-verb rule, change agree to agrees.
 Done
  • signed on as director rather than producer. Consder adding "a" before produced.
 Done
  • Scott was not a fan of previous film versions of Robin Hood, may I get some the before previous?
I believe the sentence is grammatically correct as is. I can't think of other instances where a "the" was necessary. Rusted AutoParts 19:51, 12 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I've searched MOS:the and it supports your point. Editoneer (talk) 14:54, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done, sentence reworded to make more accurate Chompy Ace 12:31, 13 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "has to retire to the forest to resume his name Robin. So he was momentarily the Sheriff of Nottingham." Doesn't sound comfortable by me, is this a sic or did you forgot to put an "as".
 Done fixed Chompy Ace 12:14, 13 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • a disfigurement this is an uncountable noun. I suggest to be changed to being disfigured
 Done
  • This would be the same horse Crowe rode on during filming of Gladiator. The ol' mighty "the" is missing, put that before filming.
 Done
  • Robin Hood held its world premiere at the 2010 Cannes Film Festival the same day as its United Kingdom and Ireland releases. It was then released on 14 May 2010 in North America. The film premieredi in Japan on 10 December 2010. premierdi, also this part of this sentence is already shown in the leading section and sounds repetitive then I suggest moving [44] to the only one left.
Could you explain this better? I took the extra I out but I'm trying to wrap my head around the second part. Rusted AutoParts 02:57, 30 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Premierdi is a spelling mistake and this phrase is already in the leading section. Editoneer (talk) 10:36, 30 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 12:10, 13 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • second highest-grossing I suggest to connect second with that same hyphen.
I can't say that's a normal grammar style I've come across. Rusted AutoParts 20:01, 22 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
MOS:HYPHEN, there ya go. Editoneer (talk) 11:59, 23 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Rusted AutoParts 02:57, 30 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Not sure if the External links should be there as we already have the sources from the reception section.
External links is a standard section for all film articles. Rusted AutoParts 20:00, 22 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Very wellEditoneer (talk) 11:59, 23 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done, removed RT, MC, and BOM on External links section per WP:ELDUP Chompy Ace 06:29, 1 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • The lead section quite forgets about the sheriff now being impersonated by Robin.
 Done Chompy Ace 12:34, 13 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Broad in its coverage

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  • Can spec script be explained shortly after mentioning it?
I feel it being linked allows the reader to find that out. Rusted AutoParts 05:29, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 12:10, 13 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Can Disillusioned, tithed grain and maybe other technological terms to be explained shortly or to be replaced with simple English words?
Disillusioned I feel is fine and is understandable as what it means. I took out the tithed in tithed grain. Rusted AutoParts 05:31, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 12:10, 13 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Verifiability

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  • [2], now Box Mojo is known to be good at providing Box offices, but they say that the movie release date is: May 14, 2010 - Aug 5, 2010, is there something about this?
That's mainly the duration of it's theatrical run. Rusted AutoParts 05:26, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 12:09, 13 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • I don't see a source for the cast, can that be provided?
The sources are in the Casting section. Rusted AutoParts 17:48, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 12:09, 13 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • [5][6]: WordPress > Error 404
Fixed. Rusted AutoParts 05:19, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done, with added archive links Chompy Ace 06:29, 1 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • [9]: WebCite query result: The connection was resetted.
Source works on my end. Rusted AutoParts 05:20, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 12:07, 13 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • [10]: 503 Service Unavailable No server is available to handle this request.
Source loads up fine on my end via archive. Rusted AutoParts 05:25, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 12:07, 13 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • [11] [13] [19] [21]: I don't see the movie.
11 and 19 sources have been fixed. 13 and 21 are there on my end. Rusted AutoParts 05:25, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 12:07, 13 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • [12]: Page not found.
Source replaced. Rusted AutoParts 05:19, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 12:07, 13 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • [20] just links me to a wikipedia page.
Not sure how that occured. The source brings up the target Digital Spy source. Rusted AutoParts 05:21, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 12:07, 13 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • [27] takes too long to load.
It loaded right up for me. Rusted AutoParts 17:48, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Yeah [27] loads, I think I meant that [26] also has unavailable service.
Same thing, loads up just fine on my end. Rusted AutoParts 05:19, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 12:07, 13 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • [33] sounds like the site discontinued.
I was able to access it, thr archive source works. Rusted AutoParts 05:19, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 12:07, 13 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • [35], [37], [39] unavailable service.
All load up fine on my end. Rusted AutoParts 05:28, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 12:07, 13 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • [62] four-hundread-and-four-error.
Loads up fine on my end. Rusted AutoParts 05:28, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 12:07, 13 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • [75] doesn't link the sequel quote.
References stop at 74. Rusted AutoParts 05:28, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 12:07, 13 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • [76] five-hundread-and-three-error.
Same thing, references stop at 74. Rusted AutoParts 05:28, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 12:07, 13 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

If you disagree with anything, tell me, I'm waiting for you to do the maintenance. Editoneer (talk) 17:41, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Editoneer: Hello, apologies for the slow addressal of the review points here. I'm just trying to find time to tackle the rest. If you just bare with me I'll get on it within the week. Rusted AutoParts 01:20, 19 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
No worries, I've also found strange that it takes you 6 days to do something regarding the references, so I checked and seems you're flooding yourself with GA reviews, so I understand. Editoneer (talk) 13:18, 19 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Editoneer: I have tackled the references, some I fixed but alot of them loaded up fine. Rusted AutoParts 05:28, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Hey can you end the rest? Editoneer (talk) 08:53, 26 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Editoneer: End the rest? Rusted AutoParts 02:54, 30 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
There some parts that wasn't referred, now please listen that I'm only reviewing the process from here and I don't exactly go on the page to verify unless all of this process is done. Editoneer (talk) 10:36, 30 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
You still forgot to  Done some things, is everything done? Editoneer (talk) 19:49, 11 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Editoneer: Surprise! Chompy Ace 12:33, 13 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Oh wow, that came out of nowhere, I appreciate you. Editoneer (talk) 12:19, 14 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Are we waiting on an additional editor to give this a look over before passing? Rusted AutoParts 23:36, 22 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Second opinion

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  • References 4 and 71 should not be in all caps per MOS:CAPS.
  • References should be archived.

Other than that, this article looks good to go. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:35, 24 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Some Dude From North Carolina:  Done Rusted AutoParts 23:52, 24 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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