Talk:Robert of Cricklade/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 16:50, 19 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be glad to take this review. Initial comments to follow in the next 1-3 days. Thanks in advance for your work on this one! -- Khazar2 (talk) 16:50, 19 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Initial comments

This looks very solid on first pass: well written, well sourced, and ripe for promotion. It's brief, but checks of Google Books and Scholar show there's clearly not much out there on the subject. I made some tweaks to the prose for small issues (a minor redundancy, a sentence where a clause didn't match the subject, a sentence that had dashes-within-dashes, etc.) Please feel free to revert anywhere you disagree, and take a look that I didn't accidentally introduce any errors.

Checklist

Rate	Attribute	Review Comment
1. Well-written:
	1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.	Prose is good. I can only access a few of these sources due to my university's apparently limited JSTOR subscription, but what I can see shows no evidence of copyright issues.
	1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.
2. Verifiable with no original research:
	2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.
	2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
	2c. it contains no original research.
3. Broad in its coverage:
	3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.
	3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
	4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
	5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
	6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.	N/A
	6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.	N/A
	7. Overall assessment.	Pass