Talk:Robert of Bridlington/GA1
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Reviewer: Amitchell125 (talk · contribs) 08:08, 5 June 2022 (UTC)
Happy to review the article.
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[edit]Lead section
[edit]- Link theologian.
- during the period – ‘from’?
- There is an image available here which you might wish to add.
1 Life
[edit]- Link Biblical commentary (Exegesis); Cistercians.
- Office occurs five times in three sentences, consider reducing the frequency.
- I would amend "Robertus cognomento Scriba quartus prior" or "Robert surnamed Scribe fourth prior" to ‘{{lang|la|Robertus cognomento Scriba quartus prior}} (‘Robert surnamed Scribe fourth prior’).
- published yet – I’m unsure that yet works (see MOS:RELTIME).
- securely - ‘definitely’? (minor point).
5 References
[edit]- Knowles et al – a url is available at https://archive.org/details/headsofreligious0000unse_o8c0/page/n3/mode/2up.
- Use https://anticompositetools.toolforge.org/hyphenator/ to ensure the formatting of the ISBNs is consistent.
6 Further reading
[edit]- https://www.google.co.uk/books/edition/The_Glossa_Ordinaria/dTawCQAAQBAJ?hl=en&gbpv=1&dq=Robert+of+Bridlington+theology&pg=PA205&printsec=frontcover - p205 mentions Robert's reputation.
On hold
[edit]I'm putting the article on hold for a week until 13 June to allow time for the issues raised to be addressed, although there are not that many points that need sorting. Regards, Amitchell125 (talk) 12:54, 5 June 2022 (UTC)
- All done but the url for Knowles et al. (I prefer not to use urls in the references), the hyphenator (as the printed copies I have use 10 digit ISBNs, I don't see how it's required to "update" them), and I can't see the pages from the Glossa Ordinalia - Brill does not like me at all (or more correctly, Brill likes my money way too much... heh). Ealdgyth (talk) 18:49, 5 June 2022 (UTC)
Passing
[edit]All looks good now, passing the article. Regards, Amitchell125 (talk) 19:50, 5 June 2022 (UTC)