Talk:Robb Butler/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:51, 20 November 2017 (UTC)
Going to review this piece of work. MWright96 (talk) 20:51, 20 November 2017 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead
[edit]- "He earned All-State honors in football his senior year in 1998." - make a slight adjustment to the text in bold so it reads as in football for his senior year in 1998 Done
- Wikilink passes and yards to Glossary of American football for non-experts of the sport. Done
Early years
[edit]- Pittsburgh, Pennslyvania is a redirect link Done
- Omit PNC Bank as the sponsor of the Big 33 Classic game as it is irrelevant Done
- "He garnered first team All-Pittsburgh City League" - gained Done
- Explain what a reception, touchdown and interception is meant in football terms by adding a wikilink to each of the three words Done
- "He accumulated six interceptions his junior year and six interceptions his senior season as well." - during his junior year & in his senior season Done
- "Robb visited Pittsburgh," - please use Butler Done
College career
[edit]- You've already wikilinked the Pittsurgh Panthers and Letterman (sports) in the previous section and you don't need another here Done
- "his sophomore year in 2000" - a slight rewording to during his sophomore year in 2000 will help Done
- Wikilink pass breakups to Pass deflects Done
- Do the same with forced fumble which must be linked to Fumble Done
- earning First Team Division I-AA All-American honors." - should be changed to earning him First Team Division I-AA All-American honors. Done
- Strong safety is a redirect link to Safety (Gridiron and American football) Done
Professional career
[edit]- Spell out the NFL in its full name and put the acronyms in parentheses like you have done in th lead. Done
- "He was released by the Chargers on September 5 and signed to the team's practice squad on September 6, 2004" -He was released by the Chargrs on September 5 and signed to the team's practice squad the following day. Done
- Added a link to kickoffs Done
- "signed by the Brigade on March 18 and placed on recallable waivers on March 27." - this piece of text would be better of being written as signed by the Brigade on March 18 and placed on recallable waivers nine days later. Done
- The Erie RiverRats and the American Indoor Football Association are redirect links Done
Personal life
[edit]- I will permit you to either write out MBA or wikilink the term. Done
References
[edit]- Reference 26 is a permantely dead link. Can you find a replacement source? Done
- Be consistent in how you present the work in your citations as you use a mixture of for example Pittsburgh Post-Gazette and old.post-gazette.com in another Done
That's all from me on this review. On hold until all of the queries have been addressed. MWright96 (talk) 21:29, 20 November 2017 (UTC)
- Think that's everything. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 03:38, 22 November 2017 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: Yes it is indeed. Can now promote to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 09:37, 22 November 2017 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 09:42, 22 November 2017 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: Yes it is indeed. Can now promote to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 09:37, 22 November 2017 (UTC)