Talk:Road Rash 3/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 11:12, 3 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Much as I love it, "fisticuffs" seems like an informal term for an encyclopedia.
"worldwide locales" settings instead of locales.
"need for a marketable feature" all things need to be marketable, was this more for "global" appeal?
EA is overlinked in the infobox.
Lead should probably mention motorcycle.
"in third-place or" no need to hyphenate.
"... third-place or higher among..." etc is a complicated sentence! Could you split it?
"number of locales around" locations or settings.
"access a bike shop" lots of "bike" in this sentence, at least ditch this one.
"player may potentially purchase" why potentially? If they can afford it, presumably they can.
"at a password entry screen" -> "at an entry screen"
"Motorcycle cops" cop is a colloquial term, not encyclopedic.
I don't think we need to link "helicopter".
"repo man for the bike shop or a snitch" these terms could be linked though.
"Breen serving as producer" no need for this serving.
What's 3DO?
What are "gameplay sprites"?
What's Sega CD?
complimented or complemented?
Link Megadrive.