Talk:Rivulis
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Adig-pt (talk) 05:36, 11 September 2024 (UTC)
Edit request 11 September 2024
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Please change the second sentence from: “Founded in 1966 as Plastro Irrigation Systems Ltd, Rivulis is headquartered in Kibbutz Gvat, Jezreel Valley, Israel” to:
Rivulis is headquartered in Singapore and is majority-owned by Temasek.[1]
Done - confirmed on company website. Encoded Talk 💬 21:48, 30 October 2024 (UTC)
Please change the third sentence from: “The company represents an integration of four industry pioneers and veterans: Plastro, T-Systems, Roberts Irrigation, and Eurodrip” to:
With origins since the 1930s, the company represents an integration of five industry pioneers and veterans: Plastro, T-Systems, Roberts Irrigation, Eurodrip and NaanDanJain.[2]
In the fourth sentence please change from:
"It has 3,300 business partners worldwide" to:
It has 6,000 business partners worldwide
Not done - can you provide a source for this? Encoded Talk 💬 21:48, 30 October 2024 (UTC)
In the fifth sentence please change from:
"The company operates 16 factories worldwide and has 2,000 employees." To:
The company operates 20 factories worldwide and has nearly 3,000 employees.[3][4]
Partly done - first source doesn't verify this info, and second source says 25 factories which I've included. Encoded Talk 💬 21:48, 30 October 2024 (UTC)
In the History section, please add this text after the sentence “In 2020, Temasek Holdings acquired a majority stake in Rivulis”:
In June 2022, Rivulis acquired the international subsidiaries of Jain Irrigation including NaanDanJain and Jain became a minority shareholder while Temasek retained majority holding.[4]
In the History section, please add this text at the end:
In July 2024, Rivulis and Phytech, a company that develops plant-based farming applications, announced a strategic partnership. Rivulis’ ag-tech subsidiary, Manna operations were merged into Phytech and Rivulis became a shareholder.[5]
In the Products section, please replace the third and fourth sentences with:
The Company offers services including professional system design, agronomic expertise, hands-on training and education, in-the-field technical support, financing, logistics and ag-tech solutions providing growers with insights into their crops, fields and irrigation systems in real time. Additional product innovations include:
In the Products section, please replace the beginning of the first bulleted item from: "Rivulis X-Pell"
to: Rivulis Defend[6]
In the Products section, please erase the fifth bulleted item (since, as mentioned above, Manna was merged with Phytech):
"Manna Irrigation Intelligence – a sensor-free precision irrigation decision support solution[buzzword] helping growers to fine-tune their irrigation decisions in real time."
In the products section, please add the following items at the end of the bulleted list:
- D5000 CX: Pressure compensated (PC) drip line with copper oxide blended into each dripper to reduce root intrusion.[7]
- Rivulis T-Tape White - Eco-friendly Trusted Tape Made from at least 50% recycled material.[8]
- Rivulis ReelView: Cloud-based crop and field monitoring application.[9]
- Partly done - tape sounds promotional, WP is not a place to advertise products. Encoded Talk 💬 21:48, 30 October 2024 (UTC)
References
- ^ "RIVULIS PTE. LTD. - Profile, contacts and insights | The Grid". sgpgrid.com. Retrieved 2024-09-08.
- ^ "NaanDan and Jain: Leave This World Better Than You Found It". Darden Business Publishing Storefront. Retrieved 2024-09-08.
- ^ "Jain Irrigation shares rise 17% on Rivulis deal". The Times of India. 2022-06-22. ISSN 0971-8257. Retrieved 2024-09-08.
- ^ a b "Israeli irrigation co Rivulis buys India's Jain". Globes. 2022-06-22. Retrieved 2024-09-08.
- ^ "Rivulis and Phytech partner to advance sustainable agriculture". New AG International.
- ^ "Technical Innovation 2021 - EIMA International 2024 - Bologna (Italy)". www.eima.it. Retrieved 2024-09-09.
- ^ Barve, Dipti (2024-05-14). "Rivulis partners with agri-tech farm Veracruz Almonds in a pioneering trial in Portugal". Agro Spectrum India. Retrieved 2024-09-09.
- ^ "You can do it all: more environmentally friendly Rivulis T-Tape White, same trusted performance | Irrigazette". irrigazette.com. Retrieved 2024-09-09.
- ^ "Agro-tech firm Rivulis offers satellite monitoring of crops, via cellphones". www.israelhayom.com. Retrieved 2024-09-09.
--Adig-pt (talk) 06:19, 11 September 2024 (UTC)
- Partly done: Please see individual comments. Encoded Talk 💬 21:48, 30 October 2024 (UTC)