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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:50, 17 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will get on with this right away! --K. Peake 09:50, 17 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Should dance really be included as a genre in the infobox if dance-pop is already?
  • Wouldn't "in various countries" be more appropriate right after the formats?
  • "it was met with a warm reception" → "the song received a warm reception"
  • "the music of the song and" → "the music of it and"
  • "including in Canada, Norway," → "including Canada, Norway,"
  • Poland should come before the certification body in that sentence
  • Pipe neon light to Neon lighting

Background and composition

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  • "Few days prior its release," → "A few days prior its release,"
  • Mention in the release sentence that it was for digital download and streaming in various countries
  • The duration is not sourced
  • Again, should dance be mentioned as a genre if dance-pop already is?

Reception

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  • Maybe merge this with the below section and retitle to Reception and promotion per that being only one para?
  • "to blend "driving instrumentals [...]" → "to blend a "driving instrumental [...]"
  • "ready to dance."" → "ready to dance"." per MOS:QUOTE
  • "kickstart the weekend" → "kickstart your weekend" per the source's wording
  • "foresaw it "to reign supreme in clubs" → "foresaw it as "destined to rule clubs" per above
  • "it peaked at number 13" → "the song peaked at number 13"

Music video

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  • Pipe neon lights to Neon lighting
  • "Ora's appearance, stating that "she's" → "Ora's appearance, stating: "She's"

Track listing

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  • Should acoustic really be capitalised?

Charts

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  • Good

Certifications

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  • Good

Release history

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  • Good

References

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Final comments and verdict

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