Talk:Riot Act (album)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Burningclean (talk · contribs) 22:27, 18 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

In the lead, maybe say the album recieved mostly positive reviews, rather than just positive reviews.
"Guitarist Stone GossardGuitar World, "The anal-retentive side of you goes, 'I think I could play better.' But then when the entire band goes "No, it's great as it is,' then you just get in the mood and embrace it."[7]
- I think the quotations are a bit messed up on this bit here and need to be redone in some parts. Also, there is no space between this and the sentence preceding it. And there is no space between 'Stone Gossard' and 'Guitar World'.
"According to Gossard, bringing in Gaspar was about being "open to new things,"[9] [1]"
- Reference [1] should come before reference [9] and there should be no space between them.
while Vedder stated Gaspar "was able to find his place" and fit in easily with the band dynamics,[1] and guitarist Mike McCready said that he had always wanted the band to feature keyboards.[10]
- Could you split McCready's input into a different sentence. Otherwise this sentence seems to drag on.
"Several songs on the album use alternate tunings, including "You Are", "All or None" and "Bu$hleaguer".[7]"
- Make a link to guitar tunings and say something to the effect that they differ from standard tuning. Someone who doesn't know anything about guitar won't understand this sentence unless you wikilink.

That's all I saw that needed fixing. Another well written album article from you. Good work. Burningclean _[speak] 22:27, 18 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Done them all, unless you think something is lacking. igordebraga ≠ 00:28, 21 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]