Talk:Rings of Power (video game)/GA1
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:17, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- "in separate states" is this in the US? It's not totally clear.
- Lead calls Buc "young" but the main body doesn't.
- Plot sections don't normally require citation but it's a little odd that this one is (that's good!) but the "Buc creates a mighty palace..." final sentence is not...
- "as a DOS and" any idea which DOS?
- "down a certain input" i think we all want to know what this "certain input" is!
- "of the "Scarborough Faire" musical" I don't really know what this means nor why someone would complain about it?
- "selling through its entire" is "through" needed at all here?
That's all I have, nice piece of work. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 15:58, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
- All points have been addressed. Cat's Tuxedo (talk) 16:40, 2 September 2021 (UTC)