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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 21:34, 9 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comments below:
  • Citations in the lead and the infobox are unnecessary.
 Not done - I left in the citations for the genres. Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • It is unnecessary to put citations like this: The sun is hot.[1] The sun is not on fire.[1]
 Done - Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Too many short paragraphs in the "Singles" section.
 Done - Fixed. Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Twitter is largely considered unreliable.
 Done - Twitter sources removed. Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
 Done - Citations have been added for the notes. Aria1561 (talk) 14:28, 10 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Expand the contraction "can't".
Further explanation needed. Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • It would be nice if you added an image of the cover of the album under fair use.
I believe the cover already has a fair use rationale within the image's "Summary" section. Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Two dead links to the "Gaon" and the "Spotify" websites
 Done Gaon chart dead links fixed. The Spotify ref doesn't contain a dead link. It just requires you to sign in to the Spotify service. It should bring you to the album's streaming page once done. Aria1561 (talk) 13:14, 10 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you very much for reviewing this. :) Aria1561 (talk) 15:37, 10 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  1. ^ a b Smith The Sun, p. 5
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