Talk:Ricky Martin (1999 album)/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 22:40, 6 October 2021 (UTC)
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[edit]- Non-free use rationale for the image looks good.
- "announced recording" → "announced the recording"
- "consists dance-pop tracks" → "consists of dance-pop tracks"
- "encouraged Columbia Records decide" → "encouraged Columbia Records to decide"
- On "Spanish Eyes" → In "Spanish Eyes"
- Add a serial comma between "sultriness, tango and dance".
- Wikilink descargas for the readers who do not understand.
- I'm sorry but it was already wikilinked in its first usage. (In the sentence of "In "Spanish Eyes", Martin refers..." آرمین هویدایی (talk) 00:13, 15 October 2021 (UTC)
- "Czech Republic" → "the Czech Republic"
- "A same track list" – rephrase
- "in addition the" → "in addition to the"
- Add a comma after "autographed Ricky Martin CDs".
- Is it "Livin' La Vida Loca" (as in the lead) or "Livin' la Vida Loca"?
- It's "Livin' la Vida Loca", sorry for my mistake. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 00:27, 15 October 2021 (UTC)
- "They acclaimed" – rephrase
- "with additional" → "with an additional"
- "emphasizing on the fact" → "emphasizing the fact"
- Vulture.com should be formatted as Vulture.
- Mark references from Los Angeles Times with "|url-access=limited".
- Mark references from Vulture with "|url-access=limited".
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: Done, thank you so much. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 00:27, 15 October 2021 (UTC)
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