Talk:Richmond Hill station (LIRR)/GA1
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Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 19:23, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
Opening statement
[edit]Hello, and come what may from this review, thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. During the review, I may make copyedits, which I will limit to spelling correction and minor changes to punctuation (removal of double spaces and such). I will only make substantive edits that change the flow and structure of the prose if I previously suggested and it is necessary. The Nominator(s) should understand that I am a grammar pedant, and I will nitpick in the interest of prose quality. For responding to my comments, please use 
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Removed, followed by any comment you'd like to make. I will be crossing out my comments as they are redressed, and only mine. A detailed, section-by-section review will follow. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 19:23, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Epicgenius: Now for ruin –♠Vami_IV†♠ 19:24, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
Prose
[edit]To quote editor Username6892 (talk · contribs), the lead should discuss the history in brief.
Done @Vami IV: I have done these. epicgenius (talk) 18:36, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
the station became a hotbed for the homeless along with animals, and an illegal waste dumping site.[12][13][15][16][17][18]
This does not need six citations.- Done
east to Lefferts Avenue.[6][8][9][10] [...] The area has been used as parking space in the past.[12][13][15][16]
Nor these four.- Done
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