Talk:Richard von Weizsäcker/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 12:06, 4 October 2015 (UTC)

• Only a few comments:

• A few more citations are necessary.

Since I cannot find any tags, I am guessing you mean the awards section?

• Tagged--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 10:42, 5 October 2015 (UTC)

• One dead link.

Which one do you mean? I cannot find one here.

• It's the last one on the list. It may take some time to load.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 10:42, 5 October 2015 (UTC)

• Instead of noting stuff with an asterisk, just put a note beside it using "{{efn}}" tags or ones of your preference

 Done

• How did he die?

Since no source states a cause of death, I am guessing he just died because he was old. All I could add is "from an unspecified cause", which I feel would be weird. I'd rather leave it with "he died".

• Note death in lead.

 Done

• All from me, --Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 12:06, 4 October 2015 (UTC)

Tomandjerry211 (alt) I have provided sources for the tags in the prose and removed those from the awards section that didn't have one. Unfortunately, the columns got kind of screwed up in the process, becuase for some reason the right one start very down low, I don't really understand why. Maybe you have more experience here? Other than that, I think everything is taken care of.

• • Nothing appears on my browser. Maybe it is loading problem? I'm not sure,but nothing wrong appears on my side. But just to note, the article has a combination of BrE and AmE. If that's fixed, I'm all welcome to pass.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 10:44, 7 October 2015 (UTC)

@Tomandjerry211 (alt): I hope that I caught every instance and changed them all to AE. Thanks! Zwerg Nase (talk) 16:10, 13 October 2015 (UTC)

• Passing, Well done.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 21:55, 13 October 2015 (UTC)

Thank you! :) Zwerg Nase (talk) 06:18, 14 October 2015 (UTC)