Talk:Richard B. Pelzer

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Richard B pelzer

I found this list of "works offered" in the article, commented out, with the comment

   Do not uncomment this section until it has been re-written with normal capitalisation

But I am thinking that, even with correct capitalization, this list might not be appropriate for inclusion in the article. They might not be notable, as there is no evidence that Is there any evidence that there is progress towards their eventual publication? Would they even be published under the titles given here? Maybe this section should not be uncommented at this time?

What if © 2006, The Beginning
Letters to Adam © 2006, The Diary
You Don't Know Jack © 2006
Apparitions © 2006, You Only Live Twice
In One Moment© 2006
The Marriage Broker © 2006, Death Do Us Part
Karen's Garden © 2004
In the Service of.© 2004
Brother Eerie © 2006
Dead Man's Chest © 2005, A Five Book Series
Perditions © 2004
Gene© 2006
Seer and Revelator © 2006, A Five Book Series
The Boys Adventure Club © 2006
Whisky Lullaby © 2006
Return To Egypt © 2006 —Preceding unsigned comment added by SV Resolution (talk • contribs) 16:37, 20 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Promotional style

Pelzer's page is written like a promo. I just stripped out the Amazon purchase links for his two memoirs, along with the book blurb text (which was surely copyright text), but being brand new to edits, I doubt what I've left is quite up to par. Also, I left the "current work" blurb, because I'm not even sure what the book title is, and again, I don't know how best to handle this whole thing. But the links to go buy on Amazon really needed removing ASAP, so I couldn't just sit and leave those. But I'm hoping someone experienced can come and fix up his page better than I've handled it. HiddenBookworm (talk) 08:08, 23 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]