Talk:Rhythm Divine/GA1

GA Review

Passed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 16:30, 23 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 02:10, 23 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Just some copy changes to make. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 03:27, 23 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Copy changes

Lead

Iglesias performed the song live at several concerts hosted by its local radio stations remove "its"

Background

one of best-selling Latin recording artist try one of the best-selling Latin recording artists
"Iglesias'" should be "Iglesias's" per MOS:'S
...multiple record labels, including Bertelsmann Music Group, Universal Music Group, and Warner Music Group to sign... Complete the appositive by adding a comma after Warner Music Group
highest-amount remove hyphen
Part of Universal's pitch involved the artist to release an English-language as early as the winter holiday season. involved (verb) the artist, an English-language (noun); a couple of words here are missing.

Music

"viva la musica" missing the accent in música

Reviews

The San Diego Union-Tribune Ernesto Portillo Jr. missing a 's
Writing for St. Louis Post-Dispatch missing a "the"

Chart performance

The song spending eight weeks at the top, until 15 January 2000, when it fell to number three. "spent"

Live performances

after being interviewed by Dan Matheson on CTV News Channel on 5 April 2000 here's an anachronism and, actually, an error. CTV News Channel did not exist with that name in 2000, but it wasn't on CTV Newsnet, either. It was an interview for CTV's morning show, Canada AM.
"The KDWB's Star Party" Drop the "the" and link KDWB-FM from KDWB (pipe it so it is just KDWB)
Link B96 to WBBM-FM
the Sun-Sentinel writer Sean Piccoli remove the "the"

Spot checks

9: Article in El Norte. el cantante espanol actualmente se deja seducir por los encantos de los sellos Universal Music, BMG-Ariola y Warner Music Y
15: Another article from El Norte. Un vocero de la disquera dijo que "Rhythm Divine" es una mezcla de ritmos latinos y mediterraneos Y
23: Assuming good faith: title and basic info checks out, but the article is paywalled. Y
30: Assuming good faith on the liner notes.
33: AllMusic for basic information on 95/08. Y
37: Video summary is adequate. Y
45: But the first single off the album, "Rhythm Divine," is a near-copy of "Bailamos." Y
64: Charted between 24 and 31 in the regions mentioned (with V for Flanders). Y
94: A day after radio host Howard Stern played a tape suggesting the son of veteran Spanish crooner Julio Iglesias was profoundly tone deaf, the 25-year-old vocalist has agreed to perform live on Stern's show to prove he can sing, his publicist said on Tuesday. Y (Mark the agency as Reuters)
98: Iglesias first act at the Aladdin. Y
102: Esa noche, los espectadores corearon "Nunca te Olvidaré", "Experiencia Religiosa" y "Por Amarte", baladas que le han dado éxito a su carrera de 13 años, pero entraron en ambiente con "Rhythm Divine" y "Bailamos". Y

Also: Ref [23] (Nación) does not list its source name.

Earwig flags the quotes, which are attributed in the article, so no issue.

Images

The only image is low-resolution, fair-use cover art with a NFUR. Y

Comments

@Magiciandude: I tried not to monopolize the review, but since it was relatively simple, I've taken care of almost everything here. However, I did not modify the CTV News Channel anachronism and the Reuters note, so you can take care of those issues and any other problems as you see fit. @Sammi Brie: I've looked over all the liner notes cited in the article and can verify that all information provided appears as printed. ResPM (T🔈🎵C) 11:05, 23 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Great. Just made the last changes on the reference items I flagged. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 16:30, 23 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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