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Reviewing article... CTJF83Talk 03:19, 27 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

  • This might just be my personal preference, but from what I remember Angelica always refers to them as babies, so maybe consider changing infants to babies?....actually I see it both ways, so a consistent term would be good.
  • Link 1 no longer links exactly to where it should
  • Actually, it does. You see, for some reason it doesn't change the URL as you go to new pages, so I made the title the navigation you need to do. If you follow that, it'll lead to the link I'm using. Is that okay? The Flash {talk} 14:04, 27 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Reptar had been used since season one, episode three, "At the Movies," as a satirical parody of the fictional Japanese monster, Godzilla." Is this sourced by reference number 7? (I can't check it) If so, please put a reference at the end of this sentence also.
  • "Angelica is lean on only eating Reptar brand cereal" It might be my lack of vocabulary, but is lean the correct word here? Consider changing lean to insistent?
  • "The ice show the babies attend mocks several different real life ice shows, including "Disney on Ice" and "Barney on Ice."" Is this sourced by #9? If so can you put a reference after Barney on ice, and if not, please find a source
      • I'm not sure if it is a policy or not, it's not a huge deal either way.
  • Is Decade in Diapers the name of the DVD compilation (as I think it is), then it needs italics, not quotation marks.

CTJF83Talk 03:42, 27 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, great job! I'm going to pass it right now! CTJF83Talk 18:06, 27 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the review! The Flash {talk} 20:06, 27 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]