Talk:Relief of Qasr al-Bahili/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 04:27, 30 June 2019 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 04:27, 30 June 2019 (UTC)

• No DABs, but a couple of geographic duplicate links
  • Fixed.
• Image appropriately licensed.
• I think that the first two paragraphs of the Siege section should be combined and The commander of the Türgesh army was Kursul. should be folded into the sentence about the ransom and hostages.
  • I've chosen a slightly different path and rewritten the section a bit. Have a look please.
• and with Türgesh military aid commas after "and" and "aid"
  • Fixed.
• Fix the title in Daniel and be sure that it's in title case
  • Fixed.
• Short and sweet.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:37, 9 July 2019 (UTC)

• Hi Sturmvogel 66 and thanks, as usual, for taking the time. I've addressed your points, please have a look. Cheers, Constantine ✍ 22:46, 15 July 2019 (UTC)