Talk:Reina Victoria Eugenia-class battleship/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 03:06, 11 December 2012 (UTC)

• Does the image have a year?

• Added. Buggie111 (talk) 01:49, 16 December 2012 (UTC)

• "As Spain was incapable of building the España class herself" -- Why not? No shipyards or no natural resources? Might help to clarify.

• Clarified. Buggie111 (talk) 01:49, 16 December 2012 (UTC)

• "Armstrongs were contracted for the design and John Brown for the construction of the shipyard and ships themselves." -- The lead says Armstrongs was to build the ships. Might be easier to say in the lead that Armstrongs was supposed to design them.

• Fixed. Buggie111 (talk) 01:49, 16 December 2012 (UTC)

• Some of the refs are in cite book templates, others are not. Please make consistent.

• Fixed. Buggie111 (talk) 01:49, 16 December 2012 (UTC)

• Also, it's inconsistent as to whether you use ISBN or ASIN numbers. Please make consistent; all of these refs probably have ISBN numbers but if you can't find them you might look for OCLC instead.

• Fixed. Buggie111 (talk) 01:49, 16 December 2012 (UTC)

• Dablinks look good. External links look good. That's all for now. Will be back. —Ed!^(talk) 03:23, 11 December 2012 (UTC)

Excellent! passing the article for GA. —Ed!^(talk) 19:09, 16 December 2012 (UTC)