Talk:Refugee Olympic Team at the 2016 Summer Olympics/GA2
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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 19:23, 30 July 2018 (UTC)
"...Ibrahim Al-Hussein, a Syrian refugee residing in Athens, Greece..." Athens can be wikilinked.
- Done. Courcelles (talk) 20:07, 30 July 2018 (UTC)
"Raheleh Asemani, an Iranian taekwondo athlete training in Belgium..." Taekwondo can be wikilinked as judoka has been.
- Done. Courcelles (talk)
In a similar vein, all of the nations mentioned in the Team selection section (Austria, Hungary, Brazil) can be wikilinked.
- Done. Courcelles (talk) 20:07, 30 July 2018 (UTC)
"The team was led by Loroupe." The use of "led" here kind of leads me to believe Loroupe competed, I assue he was just a team manager of sorts though.
- Clarified, using the exact term the NYT used.
All of the athlete backstories are touched on, besides from the looks of it Kinde and Anis. Any further info on them?
- They're touched on un the individual sports sections? Courcelles (talk) 20:07, 30 July 2018 (UTC)
"...finished 14th adn last in her heat..." Typo here
- Done. Courcelles (talk) 20:07, 30 July 2018 (UTC)
Looks good from there, great topic + article.QatarStarsLeague (talk) 19:23, 30 July 2018 (UTC)