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GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 11:14, 31 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • "1864–December" spaced en-dash.
  • "New York Giants in 1896. " would "in the 1896 season (linked) make more sense?
  • "His only MLB appearance was for the Giants on June 3, 1896. " this would probably be better next to the opening sentence, not splitting the MLB discussions with the minor league stuff.
  • "the Lebanon, Pennsylvania entry " comma after Pennsylvania.
  • "excelling at the catcher position" if no figures are given, how do we know he "excelled"? If it's someone's opinion, probably needs attribution.
  • "after his first baseman dropped" overlinked.
  • Second external link is a bare URL and liable to linkrot so needs properly formatting.

That's all I have on a first read. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 11:54, 31 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]