Talk:Red Blooded Woman/GA1
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Reviewer: Prism (talk · contribs) 17:43, 3 July 2014 (UTC)
Prose
[edit]- Initial comments (which apply to the rest of the article)
- About.com is not reliable
- Hung Medien is also not reliable for release dates/track listings/writing/production credits
- Lead
- "Additionally" is redundant (both mentions)
- "In the latter country" (I'm not sure if it can be worded like that. Also, it's redundant as the name of the country is already written in the name of the association)
- "accompanying" is redundant
- Commercial performance
- FN17 shouldn't be in the middle of the sentence
Files
[edit]- The sound sample has 26 seconds which is roughly 10% of the total length of the song.
6 comments! This is a record for me (obviously for the less issues with a GAN). Congrats! pedro | talk 17:43, 3 July 2014 (UTC)
- @Prism: Addressed all. Thanks a lot. --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 18:21, 3 July 2014 (UTC)