Talk:Really Love (KSI song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 15:10, 15 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)}

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

Immediate Failures

It is a long way from meeting any one of the six good article criteria -
It contains copyright infringements -
It has, or needs, cleanup banners that are unquestionably still valid. These include{{cleanup}}, {{POV}}, {{unreferenced}} or large numbers of {{citation needed}}, {{clarify}}, or similar tags. (See also {{QF-tags}}). -
It is not stable due to edit warring on the page. -

Links

Prose

Lede

YouTuber needs a link. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:36, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
And for DJ. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:36, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
British Phonographic Industry (BPI), - these initials aren't used again in the lede. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:36, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

General

production duo Mojam. - might need to explain what Mojam is. Weird to say "duo", and then say one thing. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:46, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Anything linked and explained in the lede needs to also be linked and explained in the body, so links for KSI etc. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:46, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Being a UK garage track, KSI "thought it made sense" to ask British singer-songwriter Craig David to perform the chorus - is this quote necessary? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:46, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"We [sent the track] to Craig, hoping [that] he'd say yes. And he gave a resounding yes." - and this one. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:46, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
David recalled, "[KSI] reached out to me [and said], 'I've got this song that I think you'd be perfect on.' And I was like, 'Yeah, I'd be well up for it. Let me hear the song.' I heard it and I was like, 'Bro, this is a tune.' So I jumped on it that [same] night [and] vocalled it. I was going back and forth with [KSI], asking him, 'What [do you] think?' And he was so on it." - and this. Couldn't we just summarised by saying both men were on board with the draft? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:46, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The writing and production is almost exclusively quotes from both men being giddy about working on the project. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:46, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Really Love" is an uptempo UK garage and dance-pop track.[2][7][9][10] - WP:CITEKILL, do we need four cites to say this? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:46, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
On 7 October 2020, KSI revealed via Twitter that he would soon be releasing a new single.[12] Two days later, KSI announced via social media - Twitter is social media though... Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:46, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The last three sections don't have any prose, could we have something explaining what it was about? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:46, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Review meta comments

I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:10, 15 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

It's been a while Timwikisidemen, any update on the above? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:01, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry Lee Vilenski, I just don't have the time right now to complete this review any time soon. It'll probably be in the next month. I don't mind if you fail the article for now.-- Timwikisidemen 07:42, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Sure, sadly I'll have to fail this one, but the info above will remain. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 12:30, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]