Talk:Real Groove/GA1

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:39, 15 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

This looks like a decent article, which I will start on today! --K. Peake 08:39, 15 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox looks good!
Add a comma after fifteenth studio album
"Alida Garpestad Peck with a" → "Alida Garpestad Peck, with a"
"and featured vocoders," → "and features vocoders," with the wikilink
"attempting to win and ex" → "attempting to win an ex"
Pipe single to Single (music)
"A remix of it with English singer" → "A remix with English singer" and move the single info to this sentence instead, adding after the release date, "serving as the album's third single."
"with added instrumentation and" → "with additional instrumentation and" to be less repetitive
Add a comma after second studio album
"Some critics also appreciated" → "Some also appreciated" per the previous sentence beginning with a mention of critics
"Minogue performed the song" → "In late 2020, Minogue performed the song"
Italicise Infinite Disco

Done

"Minogue was recording her own vocals" → "Minogue recorded her own vocals"
[6] needs to be at the end of the penultimate sentence from the Apple Music notes since that uses a quote
"doesn't know what's coming with it and it" → "does not know what is coming before it" to be less wordy
Remove overly obvious wikilink on London per WP:OVERLINK
Pipe mastering to Mastering (audio)
Pipe strings to String instrument on the audio sample text
auto-tune → Auto-Tune on the text, with the wikilink
Pipe synths to Synthesizer
Pipe strings to String instrument
Pipe talk-box to Talk box
"Minogue uses auto-tuneed" → "Minogue uses Auto-Tuned" with the wikilink
"found again with Minogue" → "found again, with Minogue"
Remove wikilink on New York City
Wikilink tempo
Remove wikilink on electro-disco
Pipe chorus to Refrain
Remove wikilink on Tokyo

Done

Change the opening sentence to mentioning that it was included as the third track and adding the release date/labels after the album
"the day earlier." → "the previous day."
Italicise Infinite Disco
Where is the LED flooring sourced?
- Removed. LOVI 33 04:31, 16 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Remove wikilink on New York City per WP:OVERLINK
Remove social media platform introduction since everyone has heard of Instagram that is online
"Instagram where fans could dance for an hour to the song" → "Instagram, where fans could dance for an hour to it"

Done

"by BBC Radio 2 on 24 December 2020 with" → "by the station on 24 December 2020, with"
"noting its "clean lines" → "noting the "clean lines" to avoid overusage of it
"on a remixed version" → "on an alternate version" since no remix is specified by the source
The source does not specify a digital download and streaming release, also shouldn't you stylize as "Studio 2054 Remix"?
- Added source to back up. "remix" should be lowercase per MOS:MUSICCAPS. LOVI 33 19:01, 16 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"was released on 30 April 2021." → "was released on 30 April." to avoid overusage of the year

Done

"compared it to that album." → "compared the song to the album."
"Gil Kaufman "silk shirt" → "Gil Kaufman observed "silk shirt"
Any idea which wiki Tony Manero should be piped to, if any?
- Per Tony Manero it seems as though he is a character played by John Travolta in two films. Perhaps I pipe it to one of the films? LOVI 33 19:08, 16 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

You should probably leave this actually; doing otherwise would be going against MOS:LINKSTYLE and the film is also unspecified. --K. Peake 19:44, 16 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

"Mike Wass of Idolator called the song" → "Wass called the song" per him already having been mentioned
"strut" while Mark Sutherland" → "strut", while Mark Sutherland"
"by in Ahad Sanwari's review for" → "by Ahad Sanwari for"
"said it is" → "said the remix is"
"Lipa's vocals saying she" → "Lipa's vocals, saying she"
"best dance songs of 2021 with" → "best dance songs of 2021, with"

Done

Done

Done

On hold until all of the issues are fixed after this smooth review! --K. Peake 08:30, 16 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Kyle Peake thanks for the review. All of the issues have been addressed. LOVI 33 19:15, 16 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

LOVI33 ✓ Pass once again to no surprise; I am consistently impressed with your hard work on these detailed articles! --K. Peake 19:44, 16 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]