Talk:Re Umberto-class ironclad/GA1

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 22:52, 19 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

No DABs
External links good.
Images appropriately licensed.
Move boilers to the power parameter.
- Done, and linked
Abbreviate Elswick Ordnance Company in the infobox
- Done
Link and abbreviate nautical miles in the infobox
- Done
Sardegna, the first use of triple-expansion steam engines. Clarify that she had the first TE engines used by an Italian warship in the lede.
- Good point
Link fire support, floating battery, naval minister
- Done the first two, but I don't think we have one for Italy (there are articles for France, Germany, Russia, among others, but not Italy)
Kind of a wall-of-text with the dimensions; I prefer to give a single range and not sweat which ship was the longest, etc.
- A fair point - see how I've rewritten it.
Don't think we really need displacement in short tons.
- Fine with me.
Be consistent about units for displacement between infobox and main body.
- Fixed
Watch your rounding errors in the main body.
- Should be fixed now.
The ships were lightly armored for her size typo--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:48, 25 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- Good catch. Thanks Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 12:23, 29 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]