Talk:Razorblade Romance/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:17, 9 March 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:17, 9 March 2018 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y (Highest is 23.7%, due to incidental parallels.) 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No Dead links Y
• No Missing Citations Y

Prose Suggestions

Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

• Released on 24 January 2000, HIM initially began recording the album with producer Hiili Hiilesmaa, who helmed the group's 1997 debut album. These sessions proved unsuccessful, however, and HIM parted ways with Hiilesmaa and recruited John Fryer, with whom the band relocated to Rockfield Studios in Wales to begin recording. suggest you change this to HIM initially began recording the album with producer Hiili Hiilesmaa, who had helmed the group's 1997 debut album, however these sessions proved unsuccessful, and HIM parted ways with Hiilesmaa, and recruited John Fryer. The band, along with Fryer, relocated to Rockfield Studios in Wales to begin recording, and released the album on 24 January 2000.
• @SilverBullitt: That is all of my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 13:34, 2 April 2018 (UTC)