Talk:Raymonda Variations
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[edit]- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 02:47, 19 May 2022 (UTC)
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- ... that although George Balanchine set Raymonda Variations to musical excerpts from the ballet Raymonda, his new ballet does not follow the plot of the original? Source: [1], p. 471
5x expanded by Corachow (talk). Self-nominated at 10:35, 4 May 2022 (UTC).
Interesting ballet, on fine sources, no copyvio obvious. I wonder if you could squeeze in that he had performed in the ballet at Saint Petersburg? - You might shorten the end to "his new ballet was plotless". --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:21, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
- I don't think it works as well. Many Russian-based dancers performed Raymonda at some point in their careers, and the ballet is not well-known to the general public. Corachow (talk) 15:34, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
- Understand, but how many of our dear readers will know that he is Russian-based, with that French-sounding name. Up to you. It's approved and can stay that way. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:50, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
- How about this:
- ALT1: ... that although George Balanchine set Raymonda Variations to musical excerpts from the ballet Raymonda, which he danced as a student at the Mariinsky Theatre, his new ballet was plotless?
- I find the fact that he danced it as a student at Mariinsky more interesting than just him dancing it in St Petersburg. Would've add that he was in the original costumes if there's more space. Corachow (talk) 22:12, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
- Good approach, thank you. How about trying to say it in chronological order, which would make "dance" more prominent? I think you have room for the costumes. Will approve if not, but need sleep first. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:31, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
- I prefer keeping either ALT0 or ALT1. In my opinion, going chronological makes the new ballet, or at least the fact that it's plotless, less prominent. Corachow (talk) 17:48, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
- both fine, I prefer ALT1 --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:57, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
- I prefer keeping either ALT0 or ALT1. In my opinion, going chronological makes the new ballet, or at least the fact that it's plotless, less prominent. Corachow (talk) 17:48, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
- Good approach, thank you. How about trying to say it in chronological order, which would make "dance" more prominent? I think you have room for the costumes. Will approve if not, but need sleep first. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:31, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
- Understand, but how many of our dear readers will know that he is Russian-based, with that French-sounding name. Up to you. It's approved and can stay that way. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:50, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
- I don't think it works as well. Many Russian-based dancers performed Raymonda at some point in their careers, and the ballet is not well-known to the general public. Corachow (talk) 15:34, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
