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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 01:17, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
I'll take a look. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 01:17, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
They were though knocked out of the European Cup at the quarter-final stage by eventual winners Ajax- odd place to stick a "though:....
Kennedy was a substitute as he lost his first team place late in the season due to fatigue- I think this needs more explanation. Do you mean fatigue over the season or he'd lose stamina during a game?
- Fatigue caused him to lose stamina during a game, though I guess this could partly be a mental thing? Anyway I re-ordered the sentence.--EchetusXe 14:51, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
Para 6 (1972–73 season) of Arsenal has alotta "Kennedy" s in it
- Ah yeah, was careful to not confuse McLintock and Kennedy. Removed a couple of Kennedys.--EchetusXe 14:51, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
Arsenal were poor throughout the 1973–74 season,- meaning they ran out of money?
- Point taken.--EchetusXe 14:51, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
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the demise of the Double winning team.- hyphen?
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In July 1974, Kennedy was sold to Liverpool for a club record £200,000.- err, we need four refs for this why?
- Removed 3.--EchetusXe 14:51, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
as the "Reds" went on to record a comfortable 3–0 win- why the quote marks around the nickname?
The "Swans" had an unsuccessful attempt...- ditto
- Earwig's copyvio tool clear.
Overall a good read - not much to complain about really.....on target for GA. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 03:05, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks, I've acted on your points.--EchetusXe 14:52, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
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- Pass or Fail: - great, well done. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 15:20, 12 June 2016 (UTC)