Talk:Rattlesnake Fire (2018)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 02:04, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

• That should be all; short but sweet! Please ping me once you have addressed my concerns so that I can know when to reevaluate. Thanks, 𓃦LunaEatsTuna (💬) 02:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

• @LunaEatsTuna: All done. –♠Vamí_IV†♠ 04:50, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

• Nice work! I am now happy to pass this article for GA status. Congrats! 𓃦LunaEatsTuna (💬) 05:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

Copyvio check

Earwig says good to go.

Files

• File:2018 04 13-18.24.10.381-CDT.jpg: relevant, high quality and copyright free—valid public domain rationale.

Prose

• "Around 1:30 PM (Mountain Time)" – standard time or DST?

• MST; Arizona does not observe daylight savings time. –♠Vamí_IV†♠ 04:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

• "The fire expanded onto the San Carlos Indian Reservation" – should it not be into?

• Probably not, but I've made this changed for consistency. –♠Vamí_IV†♠ 04:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

• "progress on April 22 thanks to improved weather" – change to "progress on April 22 due to improved weather" or something similar.

•  Done –♠Vamí_IV†♠ 04:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

• "which grew over the next day to 21,513 acres (8,706 ha)." – recommend "which grew to over 21,513 acres (8,706 ha) the next day."

•  Done –♠Vamí_IV†♠ 04:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

• "No definite cause was determined, however." – recommend "However, no definite cause could be determined."

• I have removed the "however" instead. –♠Vamí_IV†♠ 04:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

Refs

Passes spotcheck—no concerns with refs 3, 6, 8, 14, 16 or 22.

• All of the refs have archive URL parameters aside from those from The Arizona Republic; is there a reason for this?

• The Arizona Republic has been manually excluded from the Wayback Machine. –♠Vamí_IV†♠ 04:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

• Oh I see! A shame.

• Ref 13 is missing a date.

• Good catch. Fixed now. –♠Vamí_IV†♠ 04:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

• For ref 22, I would recommend mentioning the Ecological Restoration Institute.

• They're part of Northern Arizona University, so I'll pass on this. –♠Vamí_IV†♠ 04:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

• Noted.

Other

Infobox, coords, nav, cats, WP:ALT text and other templates good.

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