Talk:Ratchet & Clank: Up Your Arsenal/GA1

GA Reassessment

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch
As part of WikiProject Good Articles Sweeps, I am re-reviewing this article to ensure compliance with current good article standards. I am placing this article on hold pending improvements to the following issues:

Lots of statements are unsourced, for example the last few lines of multiplayer and the 'Insomniac Museum' section.
The story section is way too long, about equal to the rest of the content in the article. It requires a serious trim.
Lots of one-sentence paragraphs, which aren't paragraphs and should be fleshed out or expanded.
Images require more than the boilerplate fair use rationales to comply with WP:NFCC.

I am placing the article on hold for seven days; if no reasonable action is taken to address the above issues, I will delist the article. --Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs^(talk) 21:40, 23 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I will begin work on this momentarily. –Drilnoth (T • C • L) 21:43, 23 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Could you maybe give me a few extra days? I've been busy off-wiki recently and so haven't had a ton of time. –Drilnoth (T • C • L) 13:45, 27 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  - No problem. Problems are being addressed, that's all I care about. --Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs^(talk) 16:01, 27 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
    - Thanks (but I'm not werespiel as your summary seems to indicate :) ). –Drilnoth (T • C • L) 16:09, 27 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
      - stupid autocomplete tries to use my old edit summaries all the time :) --Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs^(talk) 16:38, 27 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
        Gotcha. :) –Drilnoth (T • C • L) 17:23, 27 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
        How's the length of the plot now? –Drilnoth (T • C • L) 22:08, 31 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
←Much better. --Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs^(talk) 22:35, 31 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Great! I'll try to fix the other stuff in the next day or two. –Drilnoth (T • C • L) 22:51, 31 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  - How are things coming along? --Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs^(talk) 12:23, 12 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
    - Oops! This slipped off my watchlist. I'm not going to have any time today (busy day), but my afternoon should be pretty free tomorrow and I'll finish up the rest then. My apologies for the delay; thanks for being patient. –Drilnoth (T • C • L) 14:40, 12 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
      - How's it coming? --Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs^(talk) 00:52, 18 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
        Okay; I just did some more cleanup (thanks for the ping!). Could you take another look? I think that I've addressed all of your concerns. Thanks! –Drilnoth (T • C • L) 01:18, 18 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
It looks much better. As my concerns have been addressed I'm closing the GAR. Thanks for the effort, --Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs^(talk) 16:35, 18 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- And thank you for noticing this. My apologies for the delays. –Drilnoth (T • C • L) 18:41, 18 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]