Talk:Rascals (Star Trek: The Next Generation)/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:36, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
I will review this. MWright96 (talk) 07:36, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Plot
[edit]- "they use comm badges" - communication badges
- "With command function enabled," - With the command function enabled,
- "After the events, transporter is used to return Picard," - After the events, the transporter is used to return Picard,
Writing
[edit]- The wikilink for DNA should be on the first instance it is mentioned not the second
Direction and casting
[edit]- Remove the duplicate link for Rick Berman
Broadcast
[edit]- "This was part of an overall decline in ratings during the first part of the sixth season, the preceeding episode," - replace the first comma with a semi-colon
- "received a rating of 13.4 percent" - sentence lacks a full stop
Critical reception
[edit]- "Handlen said that the Miles/Keiko scene was "dramatically interesting", and said that the part of the episode with the Ferengi was "a nice mini-action movie that helps pick up a generally dodgy hour"." - reptition of the word "said"
- "He said that it resembled the Star Trek: The Animated Series episode "The Counter-Clock Incident", and said that the first act of "Rascals" was compelling." - same issue as above
References
[edit]On hold for now. MWright96 (talk) 12:26, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
- @MWright96: Thanks for the review, I've addressed those points as suggested. Miyagawa (talk) 14:19, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
- Lovely. Can now promote to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 14:24, 18 August 2016 (UTC)