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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 05:39, 11 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 05:39, 11 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

  • "But he did not get the opportunity he was seeking." this seems like a strange thing to have in the lead; i'd just remove it.
  • "I must say, I was a very filmi kid." do you mean filmy, as written below, or is that how the quote actually is?
  • "but left it for pursuing acting seriously." to pursue.. sounds better
  • "He decided to send his portfolio across to directors." remove across; seems randomly placed in there.
  • "Anupama Chopra from NDTV also gave teh film" the film
  • "Singh won the trophy" won the award sounds a bit better here.
  • A couple of the references lack titles, publishers, and/or dates, namely the first and third-last one.

I'll put the article on hold and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 06:06, 11 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

All done, including other fixes. Tbhotch* ۩ ۞ 06:27, 11 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
The article looks much better now. As all concerns are addressed, I'll pass the article as a GA. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 06:36, 11 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]