Talk:Ranveer Singh/GA1
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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 05:39, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 05:39, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:
- "But he did not get the opportunity he was seeking." this seems like a strange thing to have in the lead; i'd just remove it.
- "I must say, I was a very filmi kid." do you mean filmy, as written below, or is that how the quote actually is?
- "but left it for pursuing acting seriously." to pursue.. sounds better
- "He decided to send his portfolio across to directors." remove across; seems randomly placed in there.
- "Anupama Chopra from NDTV also gave teh film" the film
- "Singh won the trophy" won the award sounds a bit better here.
- A couple of the references lack titles, publishers, and/or dates, namely the first and third-last one.
I'll put the article on hold and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 06:06, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
- All done, including other fixes. Tbhotch* ۩ ۞ 06:27, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
- The article looks much better now. As all concerns are addressed, I'll pass the article as a GA. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 06:36, 11 March 2011 (UTC)