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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Extraguacamole.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 07:47, 17 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Jesse Graziano (aka User:JayGraz)'s peer review

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1. You do not need to put the title in bold letters after it's used once. You used this method at the beginning of the "Plot" section, however just a simple italicization is appropriate enough. 2. The parentheses that say (dir. "insert director here") looks highly unofficial in Wiki terms. 3. You could add descriptions for each actor/actress and their character. A strong example of this is included here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Star_Wars%3A_The_Force_Awakens#Cast

Honestly, other than these three flaws, I think it would come out almost perfectly when finished and would grab a lot of readers' attentions! — Preceding unsigned comment added by JayGraz (talkcontribs) 02:33, 23 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]