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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:41, 27 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! Glad to review another nomination of yours. Will get to this shortly. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 07:41, 27 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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Club career

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Dundee United

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Charlton Athletic

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Bristol City

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Manchester United

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International career

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Style of play

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  • Another former Dundee United teammate, Davie Dodds You should have mentioned that Hegarty was a former Dundee United teammate, and used "another teammate" for Dodds.

Personal life

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That should be all. Good luck! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 09:37, 27 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Update: A bit busy now, I think I will be able to get to this only by the end of this week. Cheers! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 18:42, 27 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

OK, thanks for the suggestions.--EchetusXe 15:13, 28 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you. I notice no more issues in the article. Glad to promote this. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 15:51, 28 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]