Talk:Rain (Madonna song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 04:07, 4 June 2016 (UTC)
Infobox
[edit]- The single cover image requires an alt image description
- Added. Bluesatellite (talk) 02:36, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
Lead
[edit]Paragraph 2
[edit]- "Madonna has only performed the song during The Girlie Show World Tour in 1993, and a remixed version of the song was used as a video interlude during her 2008–09 Sticky & Sweet Tour." --> "Madonna has only performed the song during The Girlie Show World Tour in 1993, while a remixed version of the song was used as a video interlude during her 2008–09 Sticky & Sweet Tour."
- Corrected. Bluesatellite (talk)
Background and release
[edit]- Nada enchilada
- Don't understand, but I guess it means the section is fine, lol. Bluesatellite (talk) 02:36, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
- Yea that's what it means lol. Carbrera (talk) 03:16, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
- Don't understand, but I guess it means the section is fine, lol. Bluesatellite (talk) 02:36, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
Composition
[edit]Paragraph 1
[edit]- The "but not too fast" statement sounds more like an opinion to me
- It is what being written on the sheet music. Bluesatellite (talk) 02:36, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
Paragraph 2
[edit]- These first two sentences are completely unsourced, and they include quite a bit about the song's lyrical analyzations
- It is actually sourced in the citation [12] by the end of the third sentence. Should I repeat it? Bluesatellite (talk) 02:36, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
- Nothing else here
Critical reception
[edit]Paragraph 2
[edit]- Change to "Writing for The Huffington Post, Matthew Jacobs placed the track at number 43 of his list "The Definitive Ranking Of Madonna Singles" and felt the track was a departure from the previous "carnal" releases from Erotica; "It’s not terribly distinctive from the other ballads Madonna released in the early ‘90s, but then there’s the sultry chorus with the uplifting lilt 'Here comes the sun'".[21]" please
- What's your opinion on the slight punctuational change?
- Alright. Bluesatellite (talk) 02:36, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
Paragraph 3
[edit]- Since Matthew Rettenmund wrote an entire encyclopedia of sorts on Madonna, may it be a bit bias with the compliments coming from him? I neglected to mention this is my previous review for "Secret" too
- Actually, I'm not the one who added the content from that book to the article. But then, what's the difference with a biography such as Madonna: An Intimate Biography or Madonna? All those books are just the same, dedicated to one person. I guess it's fine, unless you can prove its biasness or giving sources claiming its unreliability. Bluesatellite (talk) 02:36, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
- I guess you're right. Carbrera (talk) 03:16, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
- Actually, I'm not the one who added the content from that book to the article. But then, what's the difference with a biography such as Madonna: An Intimate Biography or Madonna? All those books are just the same, dedicated to one person. I guess it's fine, unless you can prove its biasness or giving sources claiming its unreliability. Bluesatellite (talk) 02:36, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
Live performances and covers
[edit]- You could add the year after the mention of Madonna: Like an Icon
- I think it's unneeded, since the other books on the article are not accompanied by year. Bluesatellite (talk) 02:36, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
- Got it. Carbrera (talk) 03:16, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
- I think it's unneeded, since the other books on the article are not accompanied by year. Bluesatellite (talk) 02:36, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
End of GA Review:
[edit]Rest looks great; on hold as usual! ;) Good luck! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 18:00, 5 June 2016 (UTC).
- Thank you for giving time to review this article. Really appreciated :) Bluesatellite (talk) 02:36, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
- Great work, will be passing now :) Carbrera (talk) 03:16, 6 June 2016 (UTC)