Talk:Rags Parkland Sings the Songs of the Future/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 10:12, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

The "n.a."s in File:Rags Parkland Sings the Songs of the Future poster.jpg need to be filled in properly.
Opening lead para is a little light, could include some of the premiere cast perhaps?
"shifts to 2241" perhaps "shifts back to 2241"
" Tennessee" - Rags" should all be en-dashes, not hyphens.
Instead of col-spanning the two awards going to the musical itself, just put Rags Parkland Sings the Songs of the Future in the Nominee cells.
Tables would be improved if they complied with MOS:ACCESS for screen readers, adding row and col scopes.
Link "liner notes" first time.

Nothing much to complain about here at all. On hold while we address the above. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 11:37, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review The Rambling Man! I've touched up the article in all the ways mentioned. Let me know if you think there's anything else it could use! Kindly —Collin^{t c} 17:36, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Good work, happy with the article now, so promoting. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 09:29, 13 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]