Talk:Raghunath Temple/GA1
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Reviewer: Royroydeb (talk · contribs) 17:27, 21 March 2015 (UTC)
- The lead is not only short but also very mediocre.
- Expanded
- In the location section, please mention Jammu and Kashmir state as well as link Jammu city.
- Done
- Isn't it "Architecture" and not "Features"?
- In most temple articles “Features” is the title generally used as it deals with other details of the temple, in addition to the type of architecture.
- I think the Religious School section should be included in the history, because it is a part of the history of the temple. You can keep it separate by keeping it in the 3rd heading. Just a suggestion, I would like to hear your comments about this.
- A separate section would be in order. As you have mentioned it, I have now shifted it to the History section with a 3rd heading.
- Please link Ranjit Singh, and mention him as the founder of the Sarbat Khalsa or the Sikh empire.
- There is spelling error here. I have changed it to Ranbir Singh. Ranjit Singh was not involved with this temple.
- Was the translation centre during Ranjit Singh's rule?
- It was during Ranbir Singh’s time and not Ranjit Singh. I have corrected the spelling mistake
- Which Maharaja?
- Yes, Maharaja Ranbir Singh. Name mentioned now.
- Can you expand the terrorist attacks? I mean who did it.
- I kept the text here to the minimum as the attacks were incidental. Fidayeen (suicide bombers) is already mentioned in the article that it was by Fidayeen (suicide bombers). However, I have now added Laskar-e-Toiba.
RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 17:27, 21 March 2015 (UTC)
- @Royroydeb: Thanks for the review. I have complied with all your review observations.--Nvvchar. 07:39, 23 March 2015 (UTC)
- @Nvvchar:, the last thing which needs to be done is to mention who is Ranbir Singh, I mean of which dynasty he belongs. RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 08:27, 23 March 2015 (UTC)
- @Royroydeb: Ranbir Singh belonged to the Jamwal Rajput clan, which is now mentioned in the lead.
- @Royroydeb:.Will you please leave a message on my talk page on this article making it to GA.--Nvvchar. 11:42, 23 March 2015 (UTC)
- @Nvvchar:, the last thing which needs to be done is to mention who is Ranbir Singh, I mean of which dynasty he belongs. RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 08:27, 23 March 2015 (UTC)