Talk:Rafael Peralta/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 12:09, 9 August 2015 (UTC)

• Will start later.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 12:09, 9 August 2015 (UTC)
• Comments below:

• Why is there an asterisk that I can see in read mode before "Operation Phantom Force" in the infobox?
• No space between citation and previous sentence
• Anything about his early education?
• Expand the contraction "don't"
• It is standard practice to place external links after the "References" section.
• Seven dead links.
• Inconsistency: "first name last name" and "last name, first name"

• All from me.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 12:19, 9 August 2015 (UTC)
  • It has been over two weeks with no response, so unfortunately I have to fail it. Feel free to renominate at any time if these complaints are fixed