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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 25 October 2021 and 20 November 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): DPrinceDO. Peer reviewers: Aziz.hadia.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 02:58, 18 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Article Evaluation

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Radial Head Fractures Article Evaluation
Questions Comments
Is there content that is missing?
  • This is a stub class article with lots of room for expansion and added content
  • Will add sections on Anatomy, Diagnosis, Prognosis, and Treatment.
Is the article neutral?
  • The article is neutral but currently does not have a lot of information.
Sources and references
  • There are sources for two stated facts and the links appear to work.
  • The current references appear to come from reputable sources
Images
  • There are three images that do enhance the understanding of the topic but are not very specific.

DPrinceDO (talk) 15:05, 29 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review

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Lead:

  • The lead of this article describes the main points of the article very well and very clearly and concisely summarizes the article. Great job!
  • The picture in the info box next to the lead is also very helpful and informative.

Content:

  • Overall, the content is comprehensive and the flow of the article is easy to follow and well done.
  • A couple of small edits that can be incorporated - when you mention different imaging modalities for diagnosis, it might be nice to add an ultrasound image since you have one for the other imaging modalities. I understand you may not have found one during your initial image search and if that's the case, it's not necessary. Additionally, on the CT scan image - I'm not sure if it's possible but might be nice to be able to add an arrow to point out where the fracture, similar to how the x-ray image does.
  • It would be helpful to make a table or bulleted list for treatment of the stable and unstable types of fractures.

Tone and Balance:

  • Tone is neutral and unbiased. Good balance of information.

Sources and references:

  • Sources are appropriate and links work.

Organization:

  • The article is very well organized and easy to follow. There is no extraneous content and each heading is appropriate.

Images and Media:

  • The images and image captions help paint a clearer picture of the content of the article.
  • Like mentioned above under the content section, the addition of an ultrasound image and an arrow pointing out the fracture in the CT scan would be helpful.

Aziz.hadia (talk) 21:26, 14 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]