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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:05, 27 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi old friend! Will review this. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 15:05, 27 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Update: A bit busy now, I think I will be able to get to this only by the end of this week. Cheers! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 18:45, 27 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Cambalachero: Added all my comments below: Sainsf <^>Feel at home 10:46, 1 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • Merge the first two paras, they look too short.
  • I think we should link "writ" and "Self-amnesty". In the main text as well.
  • Carlos Menem is linked twice
  • full stop law and the law of Due Obedience No italics needed

Early life and career

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  • Alfonsín was born I would like to have the main text begin with his full name
  • Can Buenos Aires be linked?
  • Following his elementary schooling Not clear if "his" refers to the father or the son
  • Alfonsín bought a local newspaper (El Imparcial) I am sure you refer to the company and not that he picked up one from a stall. Can be clearly worded
  • La Plata is linked twice.

Presidential campaign

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  • the slogan "Ahora Alfonsín" In which language is this? And what does it mean?
  • the Plaza de la República No italics needed
  • in clean elections Meaning?

First days

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  • Duplink: Peronism

Aftermath of the Dirty War

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  • You say "Dirty War" at places, and "dirty war" elsewhere. We need consistency throughout the article
  • Full stop law and Law of Due Obedience don't need italics
  • Duplinks: Mothers of the Plaza de Mayo, Jorge Videla, Emilio Massera, Leopoldo Galtieri, Enrique Gorriarán Merlo

Social policies

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  • Duplink: University of Buenos Aires

Foreign policy

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  • Duplink: Pope John Paul II

Economic policy

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  • Duplink: Bernardo Grinspun
  • There is a clarification needed template
  • Link gross domestic product

Midterm elections

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  • No source for the first para?

Later years

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  • There are some clarification and citation needed templates.
  • Source for the 5th para?
  • support anyway "anyway" looks informal.
  • Duplinks: Buenos Aires, Casa Rosada

Death

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  • started a Candlelight vigil. No caps for "C"
  • Duplinks: María Lorenza, Barreneche Carlos Menem, Eduardo Duhalde, Néstor Kirchner

Legacy

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  • Duplinks: Pact of Olivos, Ricardo Alfonsín
  • son, Ricardo Alfonsín Comma not needed
  • This latter award "The" not "this"

That should be all. These done, I would be happy to promote this. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 10:46, 1 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Done, but I kept "Plaza de la República" in italics, per MOS:FOREIGNITALIC. Cambalachero (talk) 18:50, 1 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you. I believe this article can be promoted now. Great job! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 19:01, 1 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]