Talk:Raúl Alfonsín/GA1
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:05, 27 March 2016 (UTC)
Hi old friend! Will review this. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 15:05, 27 March 2016 (UTC)
Update: A bit busy now, I think I will be able to get to this only by the end of this week. Cheers! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 18:45, 27 March 2016 (UTC)
@Cambalachero: Added all my comments below: Sainsf <^>Feel at home 10:46, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
Lead
[edit]- Merge the first two paras, they look too short.
- I think we should link "writ" and "Self-amnesty". In the main text as well.
- Carlos Menem is linked twice
- full stop law and the law of Due Obedience No italics needed
Early life and career
[edit]- Alfonsín was born I would like to have the main text begin with his full name
- Can Buenos Aires be linked?
- Following his elementary schooling Not clear if "his" refers to the father or the son
- Alfonsín bought a local newspaper (El Imparcial) I am sure you refer to the company and not that he picked up one from a stall. Can be clearly worded
- La Plata is linked twice.
Presidential campaign
[edit]- the slogan "Ahora Alfonsín" In which language is this? And what does it mean?
- the Plaza de la República No italics needed
- in clean elections Meaning?
First days
[edit]- Duplink: Peronism
Aftermath of the Dirty War
[edit]- You say "Dirty War" at places, and "dirty war" elsewhere. We need consistency throughout the article
- Full stop law and Law of Due Obedience don't need italics
- Duplinks: Mothers of the Plaza de Mayo, Jorge Videla, Emilio Massera, Leopoldo Galtieri, Enrique Gorriarán Merlo
Social policies
[edit]- Duplink: University of Buenos Aires
Foreign policy
[edit]- Duplink: Pope John Paul II
Economic policy
[edit]- Duplink: Bernardo Grinspun
- There is a clarification needed template
- Link gross domestic product
Midterm elections
[edit]- No source for the first para?
Later years
[edit]- There are some clarification and citation needed templates.
- Source for the 5th para?
- support anyway "anyway" looks informal.
- Duplinks: Buenos Aires, Casa Rosada
Death
[edit]- started a Candlelight vigil. No caps for "C"
- Duplinks: María Lorenza, Barreneche Carlos Menem, Eduardo Duhalde, Néstor Kirchner
Legacy
[edit]- Duplinks: Pact of Olivos, Ricardo Alfonsín
- son, Ricardo Alfonsín Comma not needed
- This latter award "The" not "this"
That should be all. These done, I would be happy to promote this. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 10:46, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
- Done, but I kept "Plaza de la República" in italics, per MOS:FOREIGNITALIC. Cambalachero (talk) 18:50, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you. I believe this article can be promoted now. Great job! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 19:01, 1 April 2016 (UTC)