Talk:RAF West Ruislip/GA1
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 14:27, 23 October 2011 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- I'm confused about the early history. So the Air Ministry leased the property from Hilliard? This needs to be clarified in the article.
- That's better. But it seems that the land was first used for the depot later moved to Didcot; is that right? Did the Air Ministry lease the land at that time from Hilliard?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:52, 23 October 2011 (UTC)
- I'm confused about the early history. So the Air Ministry leased the property from Hilliard? This needs to be clarified in the article.
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail:
- Thanks for your review. I've added an extra sentence to the first paragraph of the History section which hopefully clarifies things. Harrison49 (talk) 21:50, 23 October 2011 (UTC)
- I've added extra information. It's unclear whether the Air Ministry leased the land, only that compensation was paid eventually. Harrison49 (talk) 19:20, 24 October 2011 (UTC)
- That's much clearer.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 04:46, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
- I've added extra information. It's unclear whether the Air Ministry leased the land, only that compensation was paid eventually. Harrison49 (talk) 19:20, 24 October 2011 (UTC)