Talk:RAF Eastcote/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sp33dyphil (talk · contribs) 00:28, 9 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Why isn't "RAF Lime Grove, HMS Pembroke V and Outstation Eastcote" placed in bold face as well?
This has been changed.
Link D-day.
This has been done.
"At the end of the war, the outstation closed soon after" --> "The outstation closed soon after the war"?
This has been changed.
"from the owners, Telling Brothers." are they a company, or should "brothers" be decapped?
Telling Brothers was the name of the company.
What are "Bombes"? And "Crown"?
Bombes were one of the types of computer used for codebreaking, they are introduced two paragraphs previously. The "Crown" is a term used to describe purchases made by the British Government on behalf of the Queen.
Where is the acronym for United States Air Force? Link USAFE, Third Air Force, 7th Air Division, and SAC. BTW, why's "SAC" in parenthesis?
The USAFE acronym is in the lead. SAC is presented as it was in the source I used. The links have been added.
Link London Borough of Hillingdon
This is already linked in the lead.
ISBN for Copeland's publication?
This has been added.
Is there something wrong with the third publication in the bibliography?
Not that I can see. It is an individually authored chapter within a book.
Add alt text to photos please.
These have been added.
Footnotes 9 and 10 have changed paths, please update.
Both have been updated.

Thank you for your review. I've made the changes you have suggested. Harrison49 (talk) 18:40, 9 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

TBH, I think some of the paragraphs are a bit chopped up, but generally, the article meets WP:WIAGA, so I'm passing the article. Sp33dyphil © • © 04:41, 12 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]